How did I do?

HI everyone, I just completed making my first skin ever. I made it a self-portrait of myself, here's a link
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how do you think I did? I'm open to listen to both praise and suggestions for what I could work on if I were to make more skins in the future, so let's hear it.

Looks alright though it's a bit weird that part of the shirt is sewed to the back of your head.

thats supposed to be the hood... but yea i think it looks weird too

edit: i fixed this and added headphones (i didnt make the headphones, i just went into the armory thing and changed the colour of them)
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The shading is kinda.. aweful.. but otherwise it's a good first shot.

alright, after working off the suggestions i got, and with some self evaluation, i got my final draft of my skin
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unless theres any major issues that pop out with this one, this is the one im keeping

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loljk its fine

If that is a self portrait of yourself, then you must be one ugly person ;P

why? =( i'm not ugly, wait...
did you see the one in the original post, or my last post where i made a fixed one?

The headphones are kinda.. bad.

I didn't make the headphones, they came from the coolshoes armory :p

Looks pretty good

danke, if you dont know what that means, its thank you in some language... idk which one though

.. German you faggot.. its german..

the final one looks good to me. good job.