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Okay okay, I know it's shit and I haven't edited it in a while (You grammar Nazis are going to go nuts).
But I guess some story is better than no story right folks?
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Chapter 1 ADAZE
BOOM! The castle door exploded open. The four teenagers standing outside were no longer standing outside. As Tristan ripped threw one of the knights with his sword he asked, “Okay which way do we go up or down?”
“If we go down we reach him if we go up we reach his cat collection, and we’re here to steal his life not his cats” Elizabeth replied. “Aww but I like cats.” James said. “Seriously James?” Cassandra asked. “Fine I guess we don’t have to stop off at the cat depository” James said. They rushed down the stairs, Tristan’s sword, Elizabeth’s daggers, James’s nun chucks and Cassandra’s ring blade cut trough the competition pretty easily.
“Cassandra I want to ask you something” James said.
“Fine go ahead,” Cassandra said.
“Why is your sword… shaped like a hula hoop?” he said.
“While we’re on the subject of bad weapons James, can you tell me how you kill anything with little nun chucks that could probably mortally injure… a fly?”
Finally they came to the end of what seemed like a never-ending corridor. “How could you kill all my knights so easily” came a very deep voice from the shadows but when he stepped forward they could see it was not the warlord who had spoken but it looked like the Grim Reaper himself. “My name is Noon I am Setin’s right hand man and he asked me to give you something,” Noon said. “Darkness unleash” Noon said. The teenagers were now clad in some sought of heavy amour each matching the color of their weapon. “Have a nice time in Adaze” he said as he summoned a portal. They all looked into the portal, their whole life seemed to be contained in this one portal, now magic doesn’t exist so the all blamed it on a bad light affects. Unfortunately they knew it was real, looking in to the vortex they saw another world, plus can bad light affects suck you in?
It was the worst day in the world to four little children, the day they went to the orphanage. Their parents had died only the night before trying to kill the evil tyrant Setin.
“This is your room kid,” said the grumpy orphanage person “you have any more questions direct them to the other kids in your room.” After the door shut Elizabeth got a quick look at the other people in the room a boy and a girl both looking about her age. “Umm so how do they divide the rooms here?” Elizabeth asked. “By age” the boy said, “we are the only three eight year olds here.” She suddenly thought she saw something glinting off of the boy’s arm but then she realized it must be nothing. “I’m sorry we didn’t even introduce ourselves, I’m Cassandra and he’s James.” The next morning another eight-year-old boy came. When he entered the room he realized that three other people were already there. “Hi my name is Tristan,” he said.
“Hi Tristan. We are Cassandra, Elizabeth and James” Cassandra said. The rest of the years went like that, they all became very good friends never for getting about getting revenge on Setin. They took up a marshal arts coarse as soon as they could (around the age of ten) they were black belts by twelve and then when they were all eighteen they decided to steal the ancient weapons at night which was a lot easier than they had all thought it would be.
As soon as they got into Adaze they were amazed bewildered and were scared, they knew magic didn’t exist yet they were in a totally new world. While they adjusted they had an argument on where to go. James and Cassandra wanted to go down to a forest because it’ has more cover than a mountain but Tristan and Elizabeth wanted to go up the mountain so they would be on high ground, each argument more convincing than the last so they split up. James and Cassandra started walking into the forest. It was getting dark so they decided to rest there. Meanwhile Tristan and Elizabeth headed up the mountain and also decided to rest on a flat surface. While James and Cassandra slept suits of amour started to come closer to them until they were about to strike when James and Cassandra both yelled, “Ahhh!” and they rolled out from underneath and they wacked the suits in the back. They kept killing them until the final one, the final one? It seemed different than all the rest. Then it did something not even it’s self-expected, it stabbed its sword right through James and James fell over with a big gaping wound.
Chapter 2 Killing the killer
James suddenly felt very cold but he wouldn’t give up. He got up and ripped the sword right out of him. “Holy Cow!” Cassandra yelled, as James threw the sword right threw the armor and it disintegrated. Then he fell back down on to a tree the gaping wound starting to spill blood everywhere. “Help!” Cassandra yelled this time as loud as she could, and it worked! Tristan and Elizabeth woke up and looked down at the forest, they started running down the Volcano but Noon stopped them and started to fight them. James still had a hole in him but for some reason he knew what to do. He whispered, “I’m sorry tree”. The hole inside him started to heal but the tree he was touching started to wither and die. Cassandra started to realize why the armor they got was colored like it was, it seemed James had the power of earth, she thought about the other colors for a while. She thought Tristan had the power of fire; Elizabeth had the power of thunder and she thought she had the power of water, but she had to try it. “Tree, GROW,” she yelled and the tree that James had sucked the life out of was surrounded in a blue water barrier and the tree started to grow faster than a tree had ever grown until it was as old and as tall as it was when James sucked the life out of it. Cassandra heard a deep voice coming out of the water barrier, it said “Well done kind one, your kindness has overwhelmed this tree and created me” a blue wolf jumped out and it was totally composed of water. While that seemingly lifeless water was talking to her the battle with Noon was still going on and Noon was forcing them up the volcano. Noon had forced Tristan and Elizabeth to the very edge of the volcano and with one clean slice knocked them both in the steaming hot volcano.
The wolf shot a large bubble at the erupting volcano, just as Elizabeth was about to touch the lava the bubble enveloped her. But it could only take one person at a time that wasn’t a problem for Tristan he was standing on the lava! He kept jumping on the waves of lava until he was out. Then just after he jumped out, a large demon (the fiery fiend) emerged from the volcano. Noon yelled, “You stupid idiot, how the hell did you activate the amour’s effect?”.
“He is not the only one who did it,” said Cassandra as she ran up the mountain with the water wolf. “Cassandra” Tristan said “the volcano is about to blow quickly create a water barrier around the forest and James”. Cassandra said
“Sure” after jumping off the mountain Cassandra created the large bubble around the forest protecting it from the volcano about to blow. Cassandra ran inside the forest as Elizabeth got out of her bubble she also got inside the forest. The volcano erupted and the lava spurted out but even if the teenagers thought they had killed Noon he wasn’t dead he was hovering above the lava. He started clapping and laughing, “You’re crazy” he said with little emotion “I’m hovering, idiot”. But Noon was the idiot at that moment; Tristan was on a giant apocalyptic demon. Tristan replied sarcastically “sure”. Tristan held on as the fiery fiend charged at Noon but just as it came Noon jumped in the water barrier.
“Idiots” Noon said as he came down. Elizabeth threw one of her daggers at him but he caught it in mid air. James finally started to get up and that’s whom Noon was going to target. He threw the dagger straight into his right arm, his robotic one. James said, “You idiot, this is a bad day to mess with me”. As James finished talking a tree grew out behind him. This was the Terra Tree.
Noon wasn’t surprised to see a large tree standing behind James, but he knew what was going to happen and he didn’t want to stick around to make it happen. Unfortunately for Noon Elizabeth was about to link with her spirit. As Noon started to float away Elizabeth said “Oh no you don’t Thrilling Thunder!”. A large blast of lightning came down and hit Noon so he stopped hovering and hit the ground. Then the tree did what he feared it would do it planted a seed inside Noon. The seed would grow and grow until it killed him from the inside.
Chapter 3 Lock him up
Noon teleported out of there before he could get hurt any more. The teenagers all said sorry to each other and made up. What they were also interested in were the large ball of lightning coming to the ground and the giant tree standing beside James. “Hello idiots” said a voice that was a lot deeper than Noon’s voice. Setin came descending down from the sky and just as he landed Noon and someone who could be (and is) Noon’s twin sister called Dusk teleported next to Setin. “You idiots are messing with my brother, I am going to mess with you,” said Dusk. “Dusk keep quiet!” yelled Setin “He has as seed in him he is worthless we are just going to use him as bait!”.
“No!” said Dusk.
“Lets go idiot,” said Setin as him and Dusk teleported out of there. “Urrrrrrrrgh” Noon said as he keeled over. The seed was killing him but it seemed he wanted to help them before he died. “Lock Setin in urrrrrrgh, each terrain that is yo--” but before he could continue he fell the ground, dead.
“I wonder what he meant by locking Setin in,” Tristan said before a loud explosion interrupted him. Setin was back to shut up Noon, but just as Setin was about to leave James yelled, “torrential earth lock!”. A sort of green glow started to come out of the forest, the green energy shot right into Setin because it wasn’t energy but it was the first lock, The Earth Lock. Setin keeled over as the power drained out of him, and then he got back up. “You little puke faces” he said he continued “I hope you don’t mind if stole your friends conscience” as he assumed that he extracted a red bubble from Tristan’s head and Tristan fell limp, but Setin had the same reaction as when James locked him the first time. “And now I bid you ado” a bright flash and they were gone. “We need to get Tristan’s conscience,” said Cassandra. Right after that Elizabeth said “They went that way” and she pointed to a direction. You had to be as fast as lightning to see where they went but Elizabeth was just that.
As they ran towards the castle they kept thinking about getting Tristan’s conscience back. They finally arrived at the castle and they could see a window that Dusk was sitting at. “I’ll take her,” said Elizabeth as she started running up the wall. As Elizabeth left beasts with blood dripping from they’re mouth came out from behind the trees. “What are those?” said James as him and Cassandra tried to burst open the door. Finally it made a large CRACK noise and it was opened they quickly shut the door and started leaning on it so the beasts couldn’t get in. James had carried Tristan on his shoulders all this time and he could now put Tristan down as he leaned. James and Cassandra stood away as the Water wolf and the Torrential tree took over. Meanwhile, Elizabeth was at the window and fighting Dusk. “Tell me what you know about Adaze.” Elizabeth said as she kicked Dusk in the rib cage. “It’s a different world from Earth,” she spluttered out “now stop kicking me!”. Elizabeth stopped she didn’t expect Dusk to cave this fast. “It’s a fast growing control world,” she said “And it’s not like I like your idiotic group but I do want to take revenge on Setin after what he did to my brother.”
The doors burst open and the Torrential tree and the water wolf held back the creatures as James and Cassandra and obviously Tristan ran further into the castle. They arrived in a large central room in the castle where Setin was standing, just then they heard the cry of the WW and the TT when they were in pain the doors slammed closed to the room and they couldn’t see they’re animal and plant. Setin threw Tristan’s conscience across the room and it hit a wall. “If you want his stupid conscience one of you will have to get it and the other one might just die” James put Tristan down and said “Sorry you are going to have to collect the conscience.”
James ran towards Setin. He jumped up and started trying to hit Setin with his nun-chucks as Cassandra ran to grab the conscience. Setin was strangling James as Cassandra just made it to the conscience and shoved it down Tristan’s throat. Life came back into Tristan and he stood up. Quickly realizing James was in trouble a large volcanic hand came out of the ground releasing James and grabbing Setin. It let go but Setin was badly burnt. Just then Dusk and Elizabeth went through the window. Then tons of lightning followed them and went directly into Setin, the Third lock was finished. Setin was just able to hover off through the window.
Chapter 4 Ezada
“I think I know where he went” Dusk said “Whenever he needed to hide from his monsters who got too powerful he would hide out on a cliff.” So they went out the front door of the castle and sure enough once they arrived at the cliff Setin was standing there waiting for them. Setin rose up and a portal appeared everyone ran into it.
Once they were on the surface of the planet they saw major changes from Adaze; first off no tower, volcano, and forest or cliff edge. Second, it was all flat not a single bump, not a single dip. Third, Dusk had vanished into thin air. “Welcome children” Setin said “this is Ezada, the opposite of Adaze”. Suddenly Tristan couldn’t control himself, he yelled out “You are the biggest idiot that ever lived!” and he started running at Setin his sword out ready to kill. He wasn’t the only one though; Setin got out his large sword and with ease stabbed James through the stomach. As the rest ran over there they realised they couldn’t help him as there were no trees no thunder and no water. Tristan laid there a large hole in his chest and looked like it wasn’t bothering him as much as it should have. Tristans eyes suddenly widened and he spat out some blood before collapsing to the ground, dead. More than a few tears were dropped in that moment. “YOU LOW-LIFE MONSTER” yelled out Elizabeth which was soon followed by a continuous lightning beam to the head. Setin fell backwards and Elizabeth took this opportunity to grab one of her daggers and slice his helmet in half, “You didn’t even show your face to the people you killed!” but when Elizabeth opened the helmet he was no man, he was a horrible demon with dark red skin and horns. Setin grabbed Elizabeth, got up and then he threw her onto the ground next to her friends. “Children!” yelled out a voice very familiar, Dusk came running out of a portal. “Quick get in the portal!” she yelled.
“No we’re not going without James!” yelled Elizabeth.
“I didn’t want to do this” Dusk said. Suddenly the three children started sinking into the ground, they looked down and the portal was now under them. They just saw Dusk fighting Setin as they went through.
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As they went through the portal, they were ripped apart from each other by a strong darkness. They each went down their own path and their life’s literally flashed before their eyes. Being a baby with their parents, time at the orphanage, in training, stealing weapons, Adaze. Suddenly some weird letters flashed before their eyes ‘daed ton si natsirT’ ‘hmmm daed ton si natsirT? What could that be?’ they thought. ‘Wait a minute, WAIT A MINUTE! daed ton si natsirT or backwards, Tristan is not dead!’ They all landed on a hard stone floor before getting up and looking around. All four looked at each other, wait all four? “Welcome back” said Tristan. “Tristan you’re alive!” Elizabeth said as she ran up and hugged him. “Now listen guys, Dusk told me while I was between life and death that we’ve gone back in time back to right after we blew up the drawbridge but this time there won’t be any knights, she said she will control them”. They ran through the bottom hallway of the castle and came up to Noon, it seemed he was resurrected as well, but instead of attacking he was in a ball crying on the floor. “Hey why are you crying?” asked Cassandra as they walked up.
“Why, why couldn’t you come earlier!” Noon yelled.
“Why couldn’t you stop him earlier?” he continued “then Twilight never would have been killed!” he yelled as he shoved his sword into the ground. “Look I realise you have no idea what I am talking about, but I’ll send you to Adaze again, two things, one, new armour two, don’t run into earlier you or we will have a paradox on our hands.” Noon said. A large portal appeared under them and they had no choice but to go back to Adaze.
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They again woke up in Adaze in the same spot where they landed the first time but this time they saw some changes, like they’re armour now not only was it their colour but it also had large gold plates over it. Suddenly Tristan’s armour burst up in flames! It was still there but it was covered in fire. The same happened to all of their armour; James’s grew roots, Cassandra’s had lightning flowing around it and Elizabeth had water flowing around hers. They didn’t have enough time to stare at their new armour as a volcano started erupting.
Chapter 5 THE END
“That’s the same volcano,” Tristan said and sure enough a large water barrier appeared around the forest. “Damn!” James said, “the water barrier doesn’t surround us, and if we get to close we risk causing a paradox!” But the large wave of lava was already appearing, so they had no choice but to run into the water barrier. They saw it all unfold, James dogging the daggers, fighting Noon, Setin coming. SETIN even though Cassandra was probably the calmest person in the group Setin killed her parents and that was too much to take. She ran out of the forest and sliced Setin. As soon as it started it was over, every single one of the earlier people saw her. Suddenly, all of the earlier people went into little particles that seemed to disappear into the hot air. A loud voice started talking in their heads, so loud they fell over in pain when it talked “You paradox creators have nearly destroyed both worlds, my siblings will be there soon to talk to you”. They didn’t have to wait long to find out who the siblings were, as Noon and Dusk appeared, “I expect Twilight has already talked to you about how serious this is!” Noon said.
“Look guys you were told not to make a paradox and you make one!” Dusk said, “The only way to stop it is to go back and cause another paradox”. A small portal appeared behind Dusk and the children ran in, she left them with one thought “Just because you kill an earlier self doesn’t mean you die” and they were gone.
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The group for once didn’t wake up they were just standing where they were meant to be, about twenty meters behind themselves from five minutes ago. James was dodging the daggers so they didn’t have much time.
Cassandra ran forward and with very little hesitation considering she was about to kill her paradox self, sliced at Cassandra it went through the armour and killed her. Again everyone disappeared into particles, suddenly Noon and Dusk appeared behind them. “Now that the paradox is fixed lets go kill Setin!” Noon said.
They rushed to get to the cliff face and sure enough Setin was standing there. “Easy, I’ll just perform the final torrential lock on him,” Cassandra said.
“I’m afraid it’s not that simple, the locks would have worked until we caused two paradoxes, some things will now still be different” Dusk replied. “Oh Dusk you think your so smart, try taking on four people, just for fun!” Setin said. All of a sudden Tristan’s, Elizabeth’s, James’s and Cassandra’s eyes all turned red “attack my minions!” Setin said. They all started attacking Dusk as she was dodging the attacks Dusk said “Noon you take care of Setin I’ll hold them off”. Noon grabbed Setin by the neck and pulled him to near the edge of the cliff. “This is for Twilight!” he said.
“Noon, if I die your coming with me!” Setin said
“Then I’ll see you… IN HELL!” Noon said
Noon shoved his scythe into Setin with no mercy at all. Tristan, Elizabeth’s, James’s and Cassandra’s eyes all turned back. It was the final blow for Setin, he could do nothing more and he knew it, so he devoted his last bit of energy to killing his killer. He grabbed onto Noon tight and jumped off the cliff over looking the sea. It was hard to know if the big splash of water came from them falling into the sea or the large amounts of tears coming from Dusks eyes. But they couldn’t stay to comfort her because a portal under them started sucking them back home. When they came out of the portal they were right outside Setin’s castle. They didn’t feel much better they got revenge on Setin but it didn’t bring their parents back. Until they were walking down the street and heard “Hey, we were looking for you guys!” someone said they didn’t bother turning around, no one would look for them. “What too cool for your parents?” someone else said, they turned around as no one else looked at them. And there before their very eyes it was the parents that they whole-heartedly believed they would never see again. After a few hugs and a few tears it was time to go home, ‘home’ it was a term they thought they would never use.
The END
Okay okay, I know it's shit and I haven't edited it in a while (You grammar Nazis are going to go nuts).
- Spoiler:
- Quite honestly I wanted James to die & no parents come back at the end but had to get it G rated for school
But I guess some story is better than no story right folks?
