Well I have been writing this story up and I want to see what you guys think of it.
- "part 1":
- Chapter 1: The arrivalAwakened by a seagull pecking on his head, he then relies that he has crashed onto this unknown island. He looks around for any of the people who came with him upon this journey for a new kingdom. He finds most of the well trained had survived the crash, looking at the broken and mangled ship that lies on the shore. The area has many high cliffs and wonders if the island is perfect enough for him to settle down and control the island for his father, Duke of Haven. He remembers the peaceful yet powerful kingdom his father has created. Lord Steel goes to a woman that much different from the rest of the crowd, she looks hostel yet nice. She looks upon Lord Steel with great confusion; she says, “Did we crash my lord?” “I believe so; have any idea where we are? That storm was so thick no one could see where we were headed.” Lord steels answers. A man approaches them and said, “Lord, I suggest we find a decent sized area to set up for a certain amount of time before dark approaches.” “I agree, Josaphine, let’s go look.” Josaphine agreed and handed him his royal sword that his father had made for him. The look on lord steel face brightened to see that it wasn’t lost in the crash. He places the sword in to its sheath next to what looks like a small knife that would be used for dinning. “Marshal, gather the men and the supplies we should return by night, and we will move out.” Lord steel said to the man who is standing there. Josaphine started to walk thru the split between the rocks. Lord Steel follows and looks down both paths. They continue out ward thru the split where the land seems to go on forever. The land is very flat almost like a plain a few small hills that would arise and fall. Josaphine who was way ahead of Lord Steel due to her training as an assailant, She had found a large forest and above the forest was a higher cliff then before. Lord Steel had caught up to her but he noticed some smoke from over the cliffs. “Do you see the smoke Josaphine?” “What s-smoke. Should we go and check it out?” she replies. Without a word Lord Steel turns back to the gap in the rocks, she follows behind. “I think it’s nearing sunset.” She says concerned. He looks at her and said “well I guess your right but I want to know if we are not the only ones here.” “But Sir we told them we would return before. “ “It’s not night yet.” he pointed out its. Josaphine thought for minute and followed lord steel before he gets himself into any trouble.
- "Part 2":
- The two pass by a wonderful looking waterfall that awed them for several minutes, Josaphine said, “What a wonderful sight.” He looks at her tired; “Should we rest for a minute?” they have been scaling the steep hill that leads to what lord steel has been headed for. After a while of rest they continue onward up. Josaphine following behind Lord Steel in his think and heavy armor, they both know that Josaphine can easily surpass Steel. The sun nearly disappearing Josaphine becomes worried about the others. Lord Steel still rushing as fast as he can in the darkening day, they reach the top and see much more black smoke that clouds the land. Reaching upon a makeshift wall of wooden stakes with very few heads that belonged to wolves, there were men that had the task to place more wolf heads upon the stakes on the wall. A man approaches Lord Steel with fear of him. Lord Steel reaches slowly for his sword at his side. The man yelled in fear, “Don’t kill me!” Lord Steel moved his hand away from his blade, and says, “we are not here to harm you, I would like to know if you are a friendly or not do you have a lord I can speak to?” the man replies, “Sir, we have no lord we are just a weak province of no one we also do not wish to war.” Lord Steel asks, “well good we have crashed upon this land we would like your aid in supplies but what do you need?” The man looks at him in great hope he will help them with something that distressed them, “Sir could you help us with the wolf problem the show up every night it disturbs man of the villages at night many of them can’t sleep,” his tone says it all there willing to help but they can’t due to the wolves.
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