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    My first story.

    killer465465
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    Post by killer465465 2011-11-05, 02:00

    Well I have been writing this story up and I want to see what you guys think of it.

    "part 1":

    "Part 2":


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    NeoCopyman
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    Post by NeoCopyman 2011-11-05, 02:17

    GAYYYYYY, Its decent.
    killer465465
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    Post by killer465465 2011-11-05, 05:14

    boi you didn't even read it you scrolled thru it >_>
    serioussam
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    Post by serioussam 2011-11-05, 05:29

    not bad, but there was a few spelling errors that you could find and edit to make it better.
    killer465465
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    Post by killer465465 2011-11-05, 05:39

    well after about a week i'm going to put more parts up as i go along into it
    of course its starting a bit slow I know but I hope i can get it up to speed.
    serioussam
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    Post by serioussam 2011-11-05, 05:52

    Ok. Good luck and hope to see more of your work.Very Happy
    Baldymoint7
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    Post by Baldymoint7 2011-11-05, 07:50

    Meh, good for a start but I shall not critique anymore, keep writing Smile.
    killer465465
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    Post by killer465465 2011-11-08, 00:38

    SOOOO like part 2 of chapter one is up happy readings Razz

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